One writing exercise I give my students is to write about something interesting which happened to them in the last 24 hours. Some complain that they lead boring lives! But writers aren't people who have interesting things happen to them. Writers are people who find something interesting in anything that happens.
To demonstrate, here's my 24-hour essay:
Support
Your Local Latté
A new coffee shop recently opened a
few blocks south of the coffee shop I usually frequent in North Kansas
City. On Tuesday afternoon, I almost
went to this new place. I drove through
its lot so I could discern in a totally risk-free manner what lay inside: by
reading the drive-thru menu. However,
all they had to eat was pastries and, since I had just come from the Y, I
wanted lunch. So I drove to a Mexican restaurant,
ordered food, and then went to my usual hang-out, where I knew I’d be welcome
to bring in outside food so long as I ordered a drink.
While eating my chicken rice bowl
and drinking a caramel macchiato, I overheard a conversation between John, the
owner of the coffee shop, and another customer.
She asked him what he thought of the new competition down the street,
the place to which I had almost gone.
John’s answer surprised me. He
didn’t diss the competition or go into a sales pitch about how his coffee was
better. Instead, he said he didn’t think
of the new coffee shop as competition. He’d
met the owner, thought he was a nice guy, and wished him well. John was more worried about the new Starbucks
going into the supermarket down the lot.
“Chains are taking over,” he said, “and I always root for local
business.”
I’ve long heard of the war between
local businesses and chains. One midtown
Kansas City coffee shop I used to frequent (no longer in business) cheekily posted
a sign behind its counter: “Friends don’t let friends drink Starbucks.” But as tempting as it is to dump on
chains, I’ve always dismissed such concerns as the usual fluff between
competitors. It’s the equivalent of wrestlers looking into the camera and
challenging the manhood of their opponents.
And, although I nominally support
local businesses, I go to chains, too. I
like variety, and Starbucks, I admit, suits my fancy sometimes.
But John’s support for the new guy
down the block gave me pause for thought. The competition between local businesses and chains is
quite real. Chains risk little and have
nothing to lose if you go elsewhere for your latté. Small businesses like John, on the other
hand, might have everything to lose.
They often go out of their way to keep customers coming back. Shortly before this customer walked in, I
overheard John serve a woman through his own drive-thru window. (You gotta have a drive-thru these
days.) She told him it was her birthday. Guess what.
She got a free drink.
It’s been several years since I
asked Sam, one of John’s baristas, if I could bring in food from
elsewhere. Neither John nor anyone else
has ever blinked when I’ve done so.
Could I get away with doing that at Starbucks? I don’t know.
I’ve never tried.
However, I will soon be taking a
risk of a different sort. I’ll go to the
new coffee shop down the street. I know
John won’t mind.
Some tips on finding stories in your life:
- Connect your story to something larger than itself. (In the above example, I connected my coffee shop visit to the tensions between local businesses and chains.)
- Look for the conflict. Without conflict, it should go without saying, you don't have a story. (In this case, the conflict is not mine but between local businesses and chains.)
- Listen. Observe. Pay Attention. (This is hard for me to do on an ordinary day, but, if you watch life happening around you, some stories write themselves.)
- Look for some way in which you've changed or want to change as a result of the incident.
- Include a few relevant details. A quote or two always helps.
So, that's it! Your writing exercise for the day, should you choose to accept it, is to write a short essay or story about something that happened to you in the last 24 hours. Post your results in the comments section below.
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